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Post  sheibakelly Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:32 pm

Cat of the Month:We do not have a cat of the month since it is almost the end of the month. So, the prize this month is money.

Topic of the Month: School

-The entry must be over 200 words
-You must have good grammar and spelling. Only a couple of errors are allowed or you will be disqualified
-You may write it in the form you want. (Like, First Person singular or plurial or, like an information story, more like an essay)
-Plagiarism is no't allowed.
-The site rules apply to this as well


Prizes:
First Place: 500k
Second Place: 350k
Third Place: 100k

Deadline: September 30th

Please post your entry here!


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Post  sheibakelly Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:14 am

Emma's Contest entry:

Eliza could already feel the knot in her stomach. It felt like butterflies were partying within her, and dread swept over her like a crashing blue waves. She did not want to do this. She was not ready to go in and face her fears.
Eliza had been dreading going back to school all summer, and now it was finally time. She worried what they would say about her, about what would happen.
She took a deep breath. I can do this, she told herself repeatedly, trying to gain her confidence.
She entered the school, her shoe getting caught in the door. She leaned down, trying desperately to get it free. She could tell that people were already staring and her cheeks got red as they noticed her predicament, but none offered to help her.
She finally freed herself and rolled her wheelchair into the school, ignoring their stares. Eliza couldn’t figure out why she was so worried about what everyone would think of her. It wasn’t like she had any friends before the car wreck.
She rolled to her locker, attempting to wrestle it open. After five minutes, it still wouldn’t come open. She began to panic as the tardy bell rang. She looked around, looking for someone, anyone, to help her out.
“Do you need some help?”
Eliza jumped, startled by the sudden voice that came from behind her. She twisted her head to look at the speaker. The speaker was a girl that was around her age, probably in the same grade. Eliza had never seen her around school before, she figured she had to be new.
Dumbstruck, Eliza finally managed to nod. “Yes, please.”
The girl grabbed her wheelchair and moved it out of the way, and carefully elbowed the locker. The door came open easily. “There you go,” she said, handing Eliza some of her books that she had in the locker. “I’m Destiny, by the way. What’s your name?”
Eliza smiled and quietly replied, “I’m Eliza. What grade are you in?”
“Seventh, you?”
“Same.”
Destiny smiled. “Cool. What’s your first class?”
“English.”
“Mine too. Come on, I’ll help you there.” Destiny grabbed the back of Eliza’s wheelchair and began to roll it down the halls towards the English class.
Eliza smiled. Maybe this year wouldn’t be so bad after all.
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Post  sheibakelly Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:15 am

Winner of this month's contest is: Emma!
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